The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.

The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
The pie charts compare the
income
sources and expenditures of a charity in the USA in 2016.
Overall
, it can be seen that donated food accounted for the majority of the
income
, whilst
program
services accounted for the most expenditure. In detail, donated food provided most of the
revenue
for the charity, at 96%.
Similarly
, with regard to expenditure, one category,
program
services accounted for nearly all of the outgoings, at 80%. The other categories were much smaller. Community contributions, which was the second largest
revenue
source, brought up 10%, and
this
was followed by
program
revenue
at 2%. investment
income
, government grants, and other
income
were very small sources of
revenue
, accounting for only 1% combined. In terms of other expenditures,
program
and fundraising and management accounted for 1% and 2% respectively. The total amount of
income
was a555 which was just enough to cover the expenditures of 552.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words income, program, revenue with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • donations
  • grants
  • fundraising events
  • expenditure
  • administration costs
  • program expenses
  • direct benefits
  • indirect benefits
  • underprivileged children
  • education
  • healthcare
  • shelter
  • nourishment
  • medical treatments
  • basic needs
  • financial sustainability
  • transparency
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