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In the future all cars, buses and truck will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages

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There is no doubt that these days no denying the fact that the main impact of cars driverless is arguable. The question is , what if the vehicle driverless is better than normal vehicles? in
this
 , essay I am going to write about the advantages and disadvantages of those new cars. In terms of the positive side of auto-driver vehicles , the number of accidents have become decreasing. The main reason given to support
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 claim is the number of traffic accidents in the cities where are just trucks driveless .To illustrate the number of traffic accidents at (KAE City) in saudi arabia is zero. In other ,words auto cars, buses and trucks are saving our lives. There is
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 an argument that auto trucks can remove driver's jobs forever and
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 they prefer human drivers thane auto-driver for a lot of reasons the most important of them they can not trust an auto driver. In my opinion , I consider that advantages are more than disadvantages of driverless vehicles and we need to focus on improving that system.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomous vehicles
  • human error
  • traffic congestion
  • carbon footprint
  • public transport
  • cybersecurity
  • vulnerable to hacking
  • mobility solutions
  • liability
  • ethical concerns
  • initial investments
  • maintenance costs
  • fuel consumption
  • optimized routes
  • transition
  • sectors reliant on human drivers
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