The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the way in which animal hide is used to manufacture
leather
products.
Overall
, there are eleven 11 in the process, beginning with drying the animal
skin
and culminating in producing
leather
goods. The first step in the diagram is when animal hide is salted and dried under the sun for a few days in order to preserve it. After the
leather
is dried, it is delivered to the factory by using a lorry. Upon arrival, the
skin
is washed with water and lime in a vat so as to remove all the salt and dirt. The washed
skin
is
then
soaked in lime for the purpose of removing protein and fat from the
skin
.
Next,
the soaked
skin
is flattened by using a roller which serves to flatten the
skin
.
Subsequently
, the flattened
skin
is soaked with Tannin ( a mixture of water and vegetable matter) so as to preserve the
skin
from rotting. Once
this
stage is completed, the soaked
skin
is polished to produce shine.
Finally
, the polished
skin
is delivered to a factory to produce
leather
products, namely shoes, bags, and balls.
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