The diagram below shows how leather goods are produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the way in which animal hide is used to manufacture
leather
products.
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Overall
, there are eleven 11 in the process, beginning with drying the animal Linking Words
skin
and culminating in producing Use synonyms
leather
goods.
The first step in the diagram is when animal hide is salted and dried under the sun for a few days in order to preserve it. After the Use synonyms
leather
is dried, it is delivered to the factory by using a lorry. Upon arrival, the Use synonyms
skin
is washed with water and lime in a vat so as to remove all the salt and dirt. The washed Use synonyms
skin
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then
soaked in lime for the purpose of removing protein and fat from the Linking Words
skin
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Next,
the soaked Linking Words
skin
is flattened by using a roller which serves to flatten the Use synonyms
skin
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Subsequently
, the flattened Linking Words
skin
is soaked with Tannin ( a mixture of water and vegetable matter) so as to preserve the Use synonyms
skin
from rotting. Once Use synonyms
this
stage is completed, the soaked Linking Words
skin
is polished to produce shine. Use synonyms
Finally
, the polished Linking Words
skin
is delivered to a factory to produce Use synonyms
leather
products, namely shoes, bags, and balls.Use synonyms
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