These days consumer are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extend do you thunk consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?

Nowadays, product
promoting
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have
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become
multi-million
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dollar business with various ways to introduce and launch the product in
market
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. Because of
this
sometimes customers could not get satisfied with what they saw in
ads
and what actually did they bought. It seems to me that
consumers
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rights should have to introduce new acts regarding
this
advertisement.
To begin
with, businesses target their specific audience by
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imaginary
products
in
ads
.
Whereas
they compare their product with
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to sneak attention of ours.
However
, it
create
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social influence to not only buy
ads
generated
products
but
also
we get dissatisfaction after buying it.
In addition
,
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some perfume company describe their bottle of spray
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long lasting
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throughout
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day, but in many cases
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could not resist or fulfil
it
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requirements as
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shown
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on
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ads
.
For
this
reason, normal individuals like us
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get hunted by
ads oriented
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products
so we could save
couple
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of bucks, yet
complication
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complications
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are always there with
fakery
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the fakery
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of
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the result
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result
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results
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.
On the other hand
, to get saved from
this
human created
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propaganda, either government should have to encourage people to purchase FDA or
ISI approved
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products
or
consumer
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protection act could help us.
For instance
, we should have to rise our voices against cheaters which could encourage many more. Because
,
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nuisance
have
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to be terminated before its
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into infection. To illustrate
to
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this
, we should only buy
products
who
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that
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get approved and passed through consumers organisation. Rather than
advertisement
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intended
products
for targeted
customer
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customers
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only. In conclusion, there are some
ads
in our society which
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people to stay safe, but
production
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and promotion of counterfeit things should not
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. In my opinion, we should read reviews before trying new
products
for ourselves, so we will stay in protection under
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act.
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