In many countries, people now wear western clothes as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this case? Is this positive or negative development?
Nowadays, traditional
outfits
have disappeared in a race of new western
designs. Because of Capitalize word
Western
ongoing
trend in youngsters in adopting different cultures. It seems to me that, Add an article
an ongoing
enhancement
of traditional and Correct article usage
the enhancement
western
wear should be balanced without missing any optimal opportunity.
Capitalize word
Western
To begin
with, current
generation of people are moving straight forward to try Add an article
the current
latest
exotic clothes, whether it is with Correct article usage
the latest
combination
casual style or with Correct article usage
a combination
suit
, jeans and Correct article usage
a suit
coat
. Correct article usage
a coat
However
, this
development had
affected Unnecessary verb
apply
market
of traditional Add an article
the market
outfits
, and so with significant
decline in sales of Add an article
a significant
local
and historical Add an article
the local
pattern
. Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
In addition
, youth in India has also
been adopting fresh clothing collection which was brought from western
culture. But Capitalize word
Western
this
evolution will not only impact on
our own historical background but Change preposition
apply
also
reflect a new perspective of ourselves. For example
, western clothing will shows
us Change the verb form
show
new
persona, but we are Correct article usage
a new
also
causing our traditional dress a burden. So upcoming generation could be the case of this
argument.
On the other hand
, if we compare our own outfits
to westerns
, which would reflect major Capitalize word
Westerns
differentiate
between Replace the word
differences
two
Correct article usage
the two
culture
. Where kurta, sari and pagdi are Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
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the perspective
perspective
of regular clothing Change the noun form
perspectives
style
in India, Fix the agreement mistake
styles
whereas
jeans, suit
, Fix the agreement mistake
suits
cap
and coat have Fix the agreement mistake
caps
also
consider
common to wear regularly in other societies. Change the verb form
considered
For instance
, this
development could be both positive and negative, yet Correct article usage
a balanced
balanced
between Replace the word
balance
this
two should be Correct determiner usage
these
crucial
option to connect our roots to other Add an article
a crucial
the crucial
culture
. To illustrate Fix the agreement mistake
cultures
to
Change preposition
apply
this
, foreigners visit our country to adopt our literature, like how we live and wear according to
atmosphere
. Add an article
the atmosphere
Similarly
, they also
get amazed by our different patterns and styles in our local outfits
same as when we try their
.
In conclusion, dressing Correct pronoun usage
them
is now consider
Change the verb form
is now considered
as
important personality, yet people would judge Correct your spelling
an
individual
by what they are wearing. In my opinion, Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
importance
Correct article usage
the importance
to
traditional clothing should Change preposition
of
be prioritise
Change the verb form
be prioritised
first,
but maintaining balance
between Add an article
a balance
the balance
two
styles is Correct article usage
the two
also
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