As modern technology has developed, many people think it is unnecessary for us to gain nutrients, medicines and clothing from any other creatures. I agree that now we do not have to hunt for the purpose of survival, but we still need food and medicines from domestic fowls and cattle in a bid to keep a nutritious diet.
On the one hand, we should shoulder the responsibility to maintain biodiversity, which plays a key role in developing a sustainable world
that is
beneficial to everyone on the planet. In the past, inhabitants made an effort to prey on as many wild creatures as they could, Linking Words
thus
struggling to get rid of hunger and protect themselves from the cold. Nowadays, driven by the development of farming and modern technologies, humans are able to satisfy their basic needs from other sources, Linking Words
instead
of hunting. Linking Words
As a result
, animals should no longer fall victim to dishes on our dining tables and clothes covering our bodies. If we cannot reverse the trend, the increasing number of endangered species Linking Words
would
become extinct just like the dodo, which, Wrong verb form
will
the
beautiful bird that we can only see in pictures, Correct article usage
a
died
out centuries ago on account of human activities.
Correct pronoun usage
which died
On the other hand
, in a bid to source more nutrition, human beings still need to raise some domestic animals Linking Words
such
as chickens and beef, which can not only make our diet nutritious, but can Linking Words
function
as a pillar of the local economy in many countries, say, Australia, Brazil, etc. If everyone becomes Rephrase
also function
Correct article usage
a vegetarians
vegetarians
across the globe, millions of employees will lose their jobs Fix the agreement mistake
vegetarian
and
we may face food shortages when agriculture cannot produce enough crops. Punctuation problem
, and
Moreover
, even if we can stop wearing clothes made of Linking Words
furs
, many scientific researchers have to utilise white miceFix the agreement mistake
fur
,
and other creatures to obtain important data, Punctuation problem
apply
thus
saving more lives from those discoveries. No one wants to replace them as guinea pigs, which will definitely violate human rights.
In conclusion, Linking Words
while
we should protect most animals from extinction, Linking Words
therefore
sustaining a diversified world, it is necessary to sacrifice some of them to meet our demands.Linking Words