The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured.
The diagram illustrates the man-made process
that is
explanation manufacturing instant noodles
.
Overall
, this
eight-step
, linear process gives information about with which device and components, one noodle is made.
According to
the first step
, flour comes by truck to the storage silos after that plus water and oil are mixed by the mixer to become dough sheets in rollers. In the fourth step
, there is one device which is long and converts to dough strips. These noodles
need to be discs and after that, the next
step
is cooking with oil and drying at the same time because ,in the seventh step
, it has to be put in the cups.
The last
two steps are the final steps of packing instant noodles
. After drying noodles
are added vegetables with spices in cups, and it is turned to labelling and sealing for sale at the end
of this
process there are two devices for doing this
procedure.Submitted by y.maryam.2004 on
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