The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
The diagram presents the set of activities required to convert
sugar
cane to carbohydrates.
Overall
, there are 7 steps that ought to be done in order to finish the process.
Firstly
, various sugar
cane palms be planted for the span of 12 to 18 months. By the time they are all fully grown, the farmers will use two main approaches in order that they gain the maximum value out of those trees. After those sugar
cane trees be harvested by either machines or humans, they will be crushed so that the crushing machine can produce juice from that. Secondly
, the manufacturing process continues with the act of purifying the aforementioned juice through a limestone filter. In lieu of the fact the water is done, the producing operations keep going with the liquor being evaporated and transmuted to syrup. After that, the manufacturer will to separates carbohydrate crystals from syrup thanks to the assistance of the centrifuge. The last
stage of the action is drying as well as
cooling the sugar
crystals until they eventually become carbohydrates.Submitted by nguyennhatanh280707 on
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