Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your orn opinion.

In the

last

century, gender equity and fading gender

differencies

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differences

have

became

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more popular. One of the topics

that is

contravesial

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controversial

among

public

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the public

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is how

schools

should be: single-sex or

mix

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mixed

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school

. in

this

essay

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I will discuss

both

schools

and point out why I agree with the latter

school

. People who are in

favor

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of

single- sex

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single-sex

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school

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schools

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believe that

benefits

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the benefits

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of it

is

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are

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overweghing

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overweighing

its

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their

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drawbacks.

On

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of the most important benefits of one-gender

schools

is that

students

can concentrate on their subjects without any hesitation. In those

schools

, since there is no

sexually

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attraction

among

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girls

and

boys

,

students

can focus on their homework assignments and can

aquire

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acquire

better scores in their exams.

Moreover

, some studies

conducting

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conducted

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on these

schools

have proved it and

students

could achieve better results in their final exams.

For instance

, I went to those

schools

and my grades all the time were

exellent

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excellent

, and it would be a result

od

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of

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our education system which

insist

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on its laws seriously.

On the other hand

, others demonstrate that

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a co-ducational

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co-ducational

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co-educational

co-education

system would benefit

both

students

and society. First of all, society is consist of

both

genders

,

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and

school

as a small society should

iluustrate

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illustrate

this

feature.

Students

in the

school

should learn how to communicate with others,

both

male and female.

For example

, a girl student in

mix

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school

make

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makes

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friends with

both

girls

and

boys

, and

it

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she

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should be educated

how

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on how

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to

mange

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manage

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their relationship in different situations

such

as conflicts.

Consequently

, in future, she would resolve her issues in

workplace

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the workplace

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with her colleagues properly.

In addition

,

students

in

mix

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schools

have been motivated to do their tasks better because of

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the riverly

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riverly

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rivalry

river

and competition that

exist

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exists

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among

girls

and

boys

in

school

.

For instance

,

girls

in those

schools

may perform better in physics to contradict a

steryotype

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stereotype

that

boys

are better in some subjects like mathematics and physics.

To sum up

, based on the arguments cited above, in my opinion,

students

should have

this

right to go to

mix

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mixed

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schools

, and going to

sigle-sex

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single-sex

schools

should not be an obligation because of its merits for individuals and societies.

Therefore

, two important issues that should be considered by authorities are the quality of education and the

oppotunity

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opportunity

of going to

school

for

both

genders,

girls

and

boys

.