Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your orn opinion.
In the
last
century, gender equity and fading gender differencies
have Correct your spelling
differences
became
more popular. One of the topics Change the verb form
become
that is
contravesial
among Correct your spelling
controversial
public
is how Add an article
the public
schools
should be: single-sex or mix
Wrong verb form
mixed
school
. in this
essay
I will discuss Add a comma
,essay
both
schools
and point out why I agree with the latter school
.
People who are in favor
of Change the spelling
favour
single- sex
Correct your spelling
single-sex
school
believe that Fix the agreement mistake
schools
benefits
of it Correct article usage
the benefits
is
Change the verb form
are
overweghing
Correct your spelling
overweighing
its
drawbacks. Correct pronoun usage
their
On
of the most important benefits of one-gender Correct your spelling
One
schools
is that students
can concentrate on their subjects without any hesitation. In those schools
, since there is no sexually
attraction Change the adverb
sexual
among
Change preposition
between
girls
and boys
, students
can focus on their homework assignments and can aquire
better scores in their exams. Correct your spelling
acquire
Moreover
, some studies conducting
on these Wrong verb form
conducted
schools
have proved it and students
could achieve better results in their final exams. For instance
, I went to those schools
and my grades all the time were exellent
, and it would be a result Correct your spelling
excellent
od
our education system which Correct your spelling
of
insist
on its laws seriously.
Change the verb form
insists
On the other hand
, others demonstrate that Correct article usage
a co-ducational
co-ducational
system would benefit Correct your spelling
co-educational
co-education
both
students
and society. First of all, society is consist of both
genders,
and Remove the comma
apply
school
as a small society should iluustrate
Correct your spelling
illustrate
this
feature. Students
in the school
should learn how to communicate with others, both
male and female. For example
, a girl student in mix
Replace the word
mixed
school
make
friends with Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
both
girls
and boys
, and it
should be educated Correct pronoun usage
she
how
to Change preposition
on how
mange
their relationship in different situations Correct your spelling
manage
such
as conflicts. Consequently
, in future, she would resolve her issues in workplace
with her colleagues properly. Add an article
the workplace
In addition
, students
in mix
Replace the word
mixed
schools
have been motivated to do their tasks better because of Correct article usage
the riverly
riverly
and competition that Correct your spelling
rivalry
river
exist
among Change the verb form
exists
girls
and boys
in school
. For instance
, girls
in those schools
may perform better in physics to contradict a steryotype
that Correct your spelling
stereotype
boys
are better in some subjects like mathematics and physics.
To sum up
, based on the arguments cited above, in my opinion, students
should have this
right to go to mix
Change the form of the verb
mixed
schools
, and going to sigle-sex
Correct your spelling
single-sex
schools
should not be an obligation because of its merits for individuals and societies. Therefore
, two important issues that should be considered by authorities are the quality of education and the oppotunity
of going to Correct your spelling
opportunity
school
for both
genders, girls
and boys
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