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Stress is a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the fact in modern society that causes the stress and can reduce it.

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Nowadays,
Stress
 is one of the popular issues around the world. Especially in developing countries,
Stress
 can lead people to serious results and they will affect themselves and society so Why does it happen? I will analyze
this
 clearly in
this
 essay
Firstly
, We are living in the age of Technology and we recognize that AI can replace humans in the future. It is our feature now and it is
also
 the reason cause we feel
stress
. Nowadays, AI has replaced some jobs that revolve around calculating, arranging, etc.
Therefore
 we cannot work normally like before. Now we have to work harder, and spend more time learning, and updating skills. If we don’t update, we will lose our job and become unemployed.
Secondly
, social media cause
us
Change the pronoun
we
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are lied
Change to the active voice
lie
have lied
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 to ourselves.
For example
, when you see a post of your friend on Instagram, they show off a luxurious life with parties, brand clothes etc, you will feel a little jealous and you will be unconfident about yourself, you will complain about yourself and you will do anything to become like that even it's lied. All of them cause you to feel
stress
 sometimes.
Last
 but not least,
this
 solution to solve
this
problem
. At least it
also
 can help us reduce
stress
 in life.
Firstly
, spend time for yourself, learning new things, and new skills make sure that you can balance work and life. Learning will make you become a better version and more confident person and travel somewhere.
Secondly
, Be smart and critical when using social media, something you see maybe it's not truth. Don't be jealous or uncomfortable when see them.
Lastly
, a Psychologist can help you figure out your
problem
 and find the solution. In conclusion,
Stress
 is a big
problem
 in many countries but it's not mean we give up. We always have a solution to reduce it. Let's figure out your
problem
 and fix it.
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