Stress is a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the fact in modern society that causes the stress and can reduce it.

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Nowadays,

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is one of the popular issues around the world. Especially in developing countries,

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can lead people to serious results and they will affect themselves and society so Why does it happen? I will analyze

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, We are living in the age of Technology and we recognize that AI can replace humans in the future. It is our feature now and it is

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the reason cause we feel

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. Nowadays, AI has replaced some jobs that revolve around calculating, arranging, etc.

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we cannot work normally like before. Now we have to work harder, and spend more time learning, and updating skills. If we don’t update, we will lose our job and become unemployed.

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, social media cause

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to ourselves.

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, when you see a post of your friend on Instagram, they show off a luxurious life with parties, brand clothes etc, you will feel a little jealous and you will be unconfident about yourself, you will complain about yourself and you will do anything to become like that even it's lied. All of them cause you to feel

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sometimes.

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. At least it

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can help us reduce

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in life.

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, spend time for yourself, learning new things, and new skills make sure that you can balance work and life. Learning will make you become a better version and more confident person and travel somewhere.

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, Be smart and critical when using social media, something you see maybe it's not truth. Don't be jealous or uncomfortable when see them.

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, a Psychologist can help you figure out your

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and find the solution. In conclusion,

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is a big

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in many countries but it's not mean we give up. We always have a solution to reduce it. Let's figure out your

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and fix it.

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Stress is a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the fact in modern society that causes the stress and can reduce it.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working argument has more advantages or disadvantages? Share your personal experience in your essay.

There is a growing awareness among people today that life should be enjoyed in all possible ways while the traditionalists do not agree with this view. They think that there are much more to be done in life other than just enjoying. Discuss both the views and draw your own opinions.