The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates how many people complained about four kinds of
noise
pollution( road works,
factories
,
traffic
noise
, domestic) in the city of Newtown to Environmental Health authorities from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, the proportion of
complaints
because of the road works is the highest,
while
fewer citizens complained about the
noise
made by households.
Moreover
, the rates of
complaints
due to
factories
and
traffic
didn't fluctuate too much during the period. In 1980, about 500 people were not happy with the
noise
caused by road construction, and the figure didn't change until it experienced a slight drop in 1986,
which
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around 400 people were annoyed by it.
However
, from 1988 to 1996, the number skyrocketed to 1200
complaints
.
On the other hand
, the trend of the figure for the
complaints
is opposite, which about 650
complaints
were
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received in 1980, but only 100
complaints
were received in 1996.  The Environmental Health authorities collected the numbers about the
complaints
of the
noise
made by
traffic
and
factories
about 300 and 400 respectively.
Factories
were reported the most in 1990 with about 800
complaints
,
while
the number of
traffic
noise
complaints
reached its lowest point at 200.
However
, they got almost the same number of
complaints
in 1996 (600).
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words noise, factories, traffic, complaints with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 7 times.
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