The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how many people complained about four kinds of
noise
pollution( road works, factories
, traffic
noise
, domestic) in the city of Newtown to Environmental Health authorities from 1980 to 1996.
Overall
, the proportion of complaints
because of the road works is the highest, while
fewer citizens complained about the noise
made by households. Moreover
, the rates of complaints
due to
factories
and traffic
didn't fluctuate too much during the period.
In 1980, about 500 people were not happy with the noise
caused by road construction, and the figure didn't change until it experienced a slight drop in 1986, which
around 400 people were annoyed by it. Correct word choice
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However
, from 1988 to 1996, the number skyrocketed to 1200 complaints
. On the other hand
, the trend of the figure for the complaints
is opposite, which about 650 complaints
were
received in 1980, but only 100 Unnecessary verb
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complaints
were received in 1996.
The Environmental Health authorities collected the numbers about the complaints
of the noise
made by traffic
and factories
about 300 and 400 respectively. Factories
were reported the most in 1990 with about 800 complaints
, while
the number of traffic
noise
complaints
reached its lowest point at 200. However
, they got almost the same number of complaints
in 1996 (600).Submitted by cindy8906115 on
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