scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junck food. some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people .Others think education will not work.Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowadays many people eat a fast meal

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of healthy food

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it is a bad habit because they can get sick like cancer but they don'

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pay attention to their future and they think

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is an advertisement so they don'

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make lunch or dinner because they don'

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have time management and waste their time so they can cook and

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they will get junk snacks. Many organizations try to find a way to

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apply

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teach everything about health, healthy feed, junk bread and, desires. so they achieved a lot of ways that

illustrated

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junk meat is bad for your health. One of the first ways is to educate the public

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other groups think

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way isn'

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correct. The first group thinks if society knows everything about their daily

diet

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and they understand the positive point about eating a healthy snack like milk, meat,

vegetable

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vegetables

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, yoghurt, water etc, they

encourage

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are encouraged

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to eat a healthy meal

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there are plenty of factors that a person decides to change their

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, if the population know the effect of

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on their

healthy

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they don'

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have enough many don'

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have a way to exchange their life

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they follow their life the same as past.

second-team

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thinks that education isn'

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enough motivation to people try to alter their daily

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. they believe there are many reasons that

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the government

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should handle them until the crowd can change their

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and eat healthy food.

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, if

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the government

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handle the prices of meat, dairy, beans, vegetable etc and try to reduce them until the people's purchasing power

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increases

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and they can eat them

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they can receive protein and vitamins etc

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, society has a healthy community. In conclusion, I disagree with them because both of them are important. the community will know anything education about healthy

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and they know how they can increase their life span and the government should support the population in prices of products until the crowd can make a good decision about

diet

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