the chart below shows what Anthropogy gratuates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the antheropogists in work after tive years.

the chart below shows what Anthropogy gratuates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the antheropogists in work after tive years.
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The chart illustrates the six activities and courses that anthropology graduates who finished their undergraduate from one university
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did. The table give information about the percentages of the antheropogists'
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from three type of employment
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freelance consultants, government sector and private companies after five years' work.
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, in , the chart as we can see, more than half of the circle nearly 52% is for those who worked full-time.
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was for the government sector which means 50% of them got $100,000+. The least amount of destination was for 5% part-time work and postgrad study
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people who forwork private companies
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gave more than others low ($25,000-49,999) salary.
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the pie chart, there are two same average, for more explanation, full-time postgrad study and not known part were 8%
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, in the table,the
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of freelance consultants and government sector that gave $25,000-49,999 and $50,000-74,999 were like each other.
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, the privet companies with $100,000+ amount of
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had the lowest percentages, in others
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were more than others. Anthropology graduates, who has no work and were unemployed, were 12% and those who worked part-time were 15%.
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