The chart shows the changes of percentage of people born inside and outside of Australia live in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
The bar chart illustrates
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the percentagewise
percentagewise
changes of Correct your spelling
percentage-wise
percentages
per cent-agewise
people
born inside and outside of Australia
inhabit in urban, rural and town
between 1995 and 2010.
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towns
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Australia
majorly settled in cities in both two period
of time 1995 and 2010
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residents
people
born inside and outside Australia
with approximately 50 percent
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per cent
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areas
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people
who live elsewhere
. The lowest proportion demonstrated in people
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respectively.
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. In 2010, Rural Change the spelling
per cent
areas
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the proportion of Change preposition
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natives
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native
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the percentages
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