the graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040
the line graph provides information on the percentage of the citizenry in four Asian nations that lived in cities from 1970 to 2020, with projections for 2030 to 2040.
overall
, Indonesia recorded the lowest rate in population from 1970 to 2000 but there was a significantly increased from 2000 to 2040 in the other hand Malaysia was the highest population that increased from 30% to approximately 85% between 1970 to 2040 compared with Thailand, and Philippines, and, Indonesia.
in the philippine, there was a slight plateau in the period 1970 and there was a sharp rise and followed it gradually
decline but continued climbing,but the most stable increase rate from 1970 to 1990 was in Thailand.
in Indonesia from the period 1970 to 2000 moderately went up but from 2000 to 2040 gradually went climbed, Change the word
gradual
on the other hand
, Malaysia has the rise it highest the
rate of population.Correct article usage
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