Thanks to developments in technology, many people today have lost basic skills such as how to repair clothes, etc. Why is this happening? Do you think that this is a negative development?

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Technology has transformed our world in all aspects.

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it has brought forward the biggest revolution in the form of the internet,

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, it has provided us with different machines that have made many of our day-to-day tasks easy.

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, there is a general perception that it has made people forget about some basic life

skills

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. In the following paragraphs, I would like to shed some light on the bases of

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thoughts. First of all, as we all know technology has made our lives easier in many ways and humans have worked hard for years to acquire

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all.

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, we have now automated washing machines and

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present in our homes that can do the work in minutes for us without any hassle. So. basically in my view, it is only about utilising the best facilities and it is not in any way related to laziness or lack of

skills

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. Individuals are just thriving to save their time , so they can invest it in the better side but a lot of personages from old generation regarded it as a lack of interest in life

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, the internet has opened many new doors for learning and mastering new techniques of all types.

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, girls can cook from easy cooking videos and teachers can get ideas for many artworks. Students can take online lectures and online workshops that can help them in mastering many

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of making individuals lazy and raw, it is actually polishing them in the long run

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, it can be concluded with full confidence that advancement has literally brought the best for us. Now, it is our responsibility to use it for a positive impact and avoid any misuse. We should

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try to learn not to be always dependent on anything but we should make the most of the facilities we have now.

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Thanks to developments in technology, many people today have lost basic skills such as how to repair clothes, etc. Why is this happening? Do you think that this is a negative development?

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disgree with this stagement.

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

Living in country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?