The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The diagram illustrates several steps of how the recycling procedure of plastic bottles is carried out.
It is clear that
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this
circulating process, beginning with plastic trash being thrown away and ending with resulting products being reused.
As can be seen, during the first stage, unused bottles are discarded in the recycling bins and taken to the factory by trucks. There, they are sorted carefully by the workers to keep only new ones. After being compressed into big blocks by a compressor, those are brought to the crushing machine in order to be pulverized and Linking Words
then
washed throughout before going to the next steps.
Once cleansed, small pieces of elastic are conveyed to another process so that they are produced into pellets. Linking Words
Subsequently
, those pellets are heated to form raw material before being packaged in bags. Linking Words
Finally
, recycled plastic is used to create new objects Linking Words
such
as boxes, pencils, t-shirts, bags, Linking Words
as well as
bottles.Linking Words
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