The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

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The diagram illustrates several steps of how the recycling procedure of plastic bottles is carried out.

It is clear that

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there are 9 main steps in

this

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circulating process, beginning with plastic trash being thrown away and ending with resulting products being reused. As can be seen, during the first stage, unused bottles are discarded in the recycling bins and taken to the factory by trucks. There, they are sorted carefully by the workers to keep only new ones. After being compressed into big blocks by a compressor, those are brought to the crushing machine in order to be pulverized and

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washed throughout before going to the next steps. Once cleansed, small pieces of elastic are conveyed to another process so that they are produced into pellets.

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, those pellets are heated to form raw material before being packaged in bags.

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, recycled plastic is used to create new objects

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as boxes, pencils, t-shirts, bags,

as well as

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bottles.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

161 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling
mitigate
environmental impact
landfills
conservation
sorted
residual waste
adhesives
shredded
pellets
manufacturing
ecological
economical
sustainable
automation
raw material
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