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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates
percentage
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the percentage
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 of the
population
 living in Asian cities from 1970 to 2020 and
also
 forecasts
of
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for
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 2030 and 2040. It
explained
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is explained
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 in
four level
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 areas
such
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as Philippines, Malaysia,
Thailand
 and Indonesia. the highest level of
population
 is for Malaysia and the lowest level is for
Thailand
at the end
. Generally, it is a huge raise in human congestion during the 1970 and 2040. Averagely, from ten
percent
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per cent
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 up to eighty
percent
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per cent
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.
Firstly
, twelve
percent
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per cent
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 of
population
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the population
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 was for
Thailand
. But it went up slightly to thirty
percent
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 in 1990.
In
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Ten years later, it stayed with no change. It is observed that
,
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 from 2020 to 2040 it has a great increase
up
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of up
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 to fifty
percent
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per cent
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.
Secondly
,
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the Malaysians
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Malaysians
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population
 was about thirty
percent
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, in continuing, their
numbers
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number
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 became more than sixty
percent
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per cent
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 and it kept
this
 increase for many years later up to eighty
percent
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.
Moreover
, there
are
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same
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the same
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 percentage of the
population
 in 2000 which consists of
Thailand
 and Indonesia about thirty
percent
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.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, thailand, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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