The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.

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The diagram shows how water is in continuous movement.

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, we can observe that it can be in different forms, liquid, solid or vapour.

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, we see that each step of the cycle is connected with the following one.

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, we will pay attention to what happens below the surface of the Earth. On the peak of the mountains, we can find snow. It will melt and will go to oceans, but, before

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, it will need runoff and passing through groundwaters which are impervious. The "snow" will enter into contact with the salt water of oceans.

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, we will look at what are the stages above the surface of the Earth. Part of the oceans will evaporate

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the sun and their high temperatures. The condensing water vapour will be in the future a cloud and the cloud is the origin of precipitations to create lakes and snow.

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evaporation
transpiration
condensation
precipitation
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percolation
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