The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

The map provides information on the changes made between the year 2000 and the present time bookstore.

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, multiple changes have been made around the Fiction area, new amenities are built and over the period some areas have been kept untouched. In the year 2000, Fiction

books

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held the most place but now, it has been reconstructed into various categories

such

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as Art, Hobbies, Cookery and with Fiction

books

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followed by Non-Fiction

books

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However

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, these categories were there at the starting period as well but in smaller sections usually new tables are placed in the present time.

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, the Non-Fiction section is now changed into a Cafe area just below the tables. Proper segregation has been made over time to accommodate and provide feasible service to the customers.

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, the things which did not change were the Travel area, New

Books

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section, and Service Desk, despite major changes, these areas are kept the same.

Melroy

Jul 17, 2023

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.

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