In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they wil be able to read everything the everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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in technology have affected every aspect of
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life. One of
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aspects is media and
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since every piece of information is available on the internet without going to
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a newspaper or a book. It is predicted that in the future it will more likely
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eliminate
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paper based
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databases and be replaced by online platforms, and I
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partially
partly
partally
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partially
agree with
this
prediction owing
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following reasons: The first and perhaps the most
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important
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the statement is that they believe that printed resources as a valuable part of
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development should not be forgotten. Books and
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magazines
as a part of our history should be alive in order to
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informing
the next generation about
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fact that what
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science
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today has
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depended on books and journals which assisted researchers in their way.
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, There are numerous people having
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a desire
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to touch and smell the paper and
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sense of belonging to the past is appealing
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them.
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technology
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an
apportunity
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opportunity
to be more comfortable,
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people prefer to follow dated rules.
On the other hand
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the popularity
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of online-based resources is deniable. First of all, for producing one piece of paper, plenty of trees should be cuteen
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the process of making it is threatening
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nature and in the long-term our globe. After that, accessibility of printed
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media
is
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and costly.
For example
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purchusing
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purchasing
a newspaper individuals should go to the store and pay money
while
with one click on pc or
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scrolling
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on
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mobile
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the mobile
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phone they can gain
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amount of news and data.
To sum up
, based on the reasons cited above, I tend to
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parially
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partially
agree with the issue since online databases are more convenient and should be noticed.
however
, we should not ignore the importance of paper-based books and newspapers and make efforts to highlight
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significance in promoting science and technology.
Submitted by m.jalili1993 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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