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Over the last ten years,western societies have seen close to a 20% rise in the number od children who are overweight.This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this worrying tend.

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It is an irrefutable fact that the percentage of obese juveniles in
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modern society has elevated by almost 20% in the
last
 ten years.
This
 trend can be ascribed to a number of reasons
along with
 its catastrophic effects which would be discussed in the following paragraphs
along with
 optimum solutions. To commence with,there are many reasons behind
this
 problem.The first and foremost cause is,having
poor
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 diet.Most of
youngsters
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 prefer to eat at different restaurants daily. Individuals increase their body weight rapidly by eating junk food.To cite an example,a
junvenile
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juvenile
 eat junk food daily and do not
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as a result
,they become overweight.
Furthermore
,lack of exercise is
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 main reason.
Due to
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schedule
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 the juveniles do not have much time for
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exercise,
hence
 it escalates the weight and the pupil become more obese.
However
,
this
 negative phenomenon leads to certain serious repercussions.The first adverse impact is that giving rise to
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 of diseases.
The youngsters
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 who are overweight
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from
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 many chronic diseases
such
 as heart disease ,stroke, depression and so on.The power of
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 system is
also
 weak because of these diseases.
In addition
,bad impact on
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mental health.
The obese
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 children have to experience bullying from other juveniles.To illustrate,when one student in the
clkass
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class
 is overweight as compared to other students
then
 the child has to face difficulties
such
 as bullying and they
also
 lack
behinf
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behind
belief
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 studies as well.
To conclude
,there are obvious reasons for the problems
such
 as poor diet and lack of exercise.
This
 negative trend has a detrimental impact on
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myriad
 aspects
such
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phsical
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physical
 health
as well as
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mental health.

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