The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S.
The pie chart illustrates the data about a wide type of
animal
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animals
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in the assessment of the US.
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, rabbits are the highest consumption of
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exam,
while
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the lowest percentage of them is for primates.
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rabbits have the highest place by approximately 39%. In regard, the second stage is for hamsters by roughly 28%. Based on
these information
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, these animal
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were use
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use
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in more than half of the tests in the US.
According to
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these statistics, the number of tests with dogs stood in the third level by above 10%.
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, the usage of pigs and primates
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almost the same amount
by
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about 9% in
this
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country.
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, the
last
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consumption of
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test is for sheep by less than 6%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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