The bar chart below shows how frequently people in USA are in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The bar chart below shows how frequently people in USA are in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The data given in the chart illustrates the frequency based on fast-
food
consumption in the USA from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
, most
of
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people
in the USA consume fast
food
once a week for one decade. A part of
people
also
went to fast
food
restaurants once or twice a month.
However
, only a small portion of
people
eat fast
food
every day and/or never consume it. Most residents in the USA visited fast
food
restaurants once a week in 2003, 2006, and 2013 with approximately 31, 33, and 27 per cent respectively.
Although
in 2006 the percentage of once-a-week fast
food
consumption was the highest amongst all categories, most citizens began to visit fast
food
once or twice a month in 2013. Of the six categories, the frequency of
people
who ingest fast
food
every day is the smallest one, which never exceeded 5 per cent.
In addition
, only least than 6% never consumed fast
food
. In terms of stopping by fast
food
eateries several times a week and a few times a year, the percentages vary between 10% and 20%.
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