some people believe that technology causes more problems for modern society than solves. do you agree or disagree?

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the digital age like now, everything is developed and convenient. Some argue that the

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bring more negative impact than

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totally agree with both ideas. On the

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has been widespread

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every area of daily life. The technological change of the workplace, in industry and traditionally white-collar jobs.

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, many modern automatic

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are used to replace workers. All hand-production

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leading to

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mass unemployment.

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, in the 1970s, the advent of the personal computer marked the beginning of the Digital Age. With the developed world, there was a

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transition

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to a high-tech economy based on computerization. Many

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and economists around the world are considering

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the negative effects of automation as soon as

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disrupted many service sector jobs,

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, switchboard operators, and production-line jobs have

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largely disappeared.

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mass unemployment is to introduce a universal basic income that all citizens receive an unconditional sum of money every month. On the other side, the development of

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a largely negative impact on the environment.

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automation and

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in industry.

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is lead to many wastes

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released into

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air and water causing serious damage.

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, many plastic factories and industrial zones not only emit a large amount of emissions

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contribute to the environment more and more plastic waste.

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that the government needs to do is

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rules to limit

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problem. And each individual needs to action to protect the environment

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of

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plastic,

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the garbage in

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place.

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there are some disadvantages of automation. I believe there are some positive values that

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brings to humanity.