The graph below shows the number of Asian elephents between 1997 and 2004

The chart illustrates the figure for

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in nine different Asian countries.

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the

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of Asian

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in all nations decreased,

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that of Cambodia increased throughout the period. It is

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notable that India accounted for the highest

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of

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in both two years. In 1997, India was the Asian country with the most

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,

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10000

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. The second was Myanmar with over 5000

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.

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was follow

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by Vietnam, Cambodia,

Laos

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and Laos

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with 1000

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while

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Malaysia, Sri Lanka and Thai Land had

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noticeably higher quantities of roughly 3000

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. The least

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of

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come from China with nearly 500

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in the year 1997. After 7 years, the

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of

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in all countries declined, except

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Cambodia. In 2004,

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India witnessed a steady

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of

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in

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elephant

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which stood at over 7500, it was still

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at

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the top of the graph.

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the figure for Myanmar dropped to 4800, and only to 1200 in Thailand. By

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contrast

,

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Cambodia

is the only country where the statistics for

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increased, the opposite was true for Malaysia which plummeted dramatically to over 1000

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. At the same time, there was a slight decrease in Vietnam, Laos,

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and Sri

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Lanka, which stood at 1000 and 2800 respectively.

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, China had the least

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of

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in the first period, and the data for that dropped to

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half in the

last

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year.