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Some people think that zoo are cruel and all zoos should closed.However, some people think zoo can help protect animals Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, an increasing number of
animals
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 are put in
zoos
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. Some people believe that
zoos
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 are cruel and should be closed,
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 others argue that
zoos
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 are good to protect the
animals
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. In fact, I side with those who believe that
zoos
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 should be closed because they cause harm to
animals
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. On the one hand,
zoos
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 can make
animals
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stress
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. Isolating
animals
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 in small areas can make
animals
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 feel bored by having the same routine day by day.
This
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 feeling can lead to
stress
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.
For instance
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, wild
animals
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such
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 as tigers and crocodiles have a sense of hunting. They used to be a predator and hunt other
animals
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. By putting in
zoos
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, they can not hunt and have limited activities.
Consequently
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,
animals
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 can die because of
stress
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.
On the other hand
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,
zoos
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 can help
animals
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. Presently, there is an increasing number of
hunters
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. They love to hunt
animals
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 for money. They usually take a part of an animal's body to sell it on the black market.
However
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, by isolating in
zoos
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,
animals
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 can be safer from
hunters
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. They can get food and enjoy their lives without worrying about
hunters
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. For illustration, some
animals
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 that are almost extinct can be helped
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 as orang utan. Orangutans can be safer if they are in
zoos
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.
As a result
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, the number of orangutans can increase.
To sum up
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, it is becoming increasingly common for people to put
animals
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 in
zoos
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.
However
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, some people believe that it will hurt the
animals
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,
such
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 as make them
stress
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. Meanwhile, others argue that it will be good for
animals
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 because it will make them can be killed by
hunters
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. I am firmly convinced that putting
animals
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 in
zoos
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 is a better option because it makes them safer.

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