Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you cannot go anymore Say who can go instead of you Say why this person is a good person to go with

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Dear Mahima, I hope you are doing well. I am writing with regard to the plan you made for us to watch a

movie

together

this

weekend and I am afraid that I cannot go with you to the

movie

. I have a doctor's appointment

this

weekend, unfortunately. I could cancel the appointment but it would be really difficult to get the next appointment as he is very busy and sometimes the waiting list can go up to six months.

However

, I would like to suggest taking my roommate with you to the

movie

as he is

also

a fan of superheroes, especially he is fond of Iron Man who happens to be your favourite character as well. I think you would really enjoy the

movie

with him than you would with me because he shares the same interests as you.

In addition

to that, you need not travel alone home in a taxi late at night because he will drop you home after the

movie

in his own car safely and don't worry I already spoke to him about

this

. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours lovingly, Sahithi

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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