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Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree

#libraries #waste #money #computer #technology #functions
Informational technologies destroyed or going to destroy a lot of traditional forms of knowledge sharing and keeping - classic university classes, newspapers, printed books, encyclopedias and etc.
That is
 why there is very popular public opinion on the problem of public
libraries
 funding. They say that there is no need to maintain
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 public
libraries
 because
Internet
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, electronic
libraries
 and computers replaced them. As for me, public
libraries
 can not be
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 computers and
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 as
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 of information and a place where a person can get the sources of knowledge. It is obvious that today it is much easier to get access to Congress Library,
for example
,
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 than it was 20 years ago. And for that
purpose
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 you do not have to go there physically. All you need is a laptop and
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.
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 I can not say that public
libraries
 must be closed. My own experience shows that nowadays public
libraries
 spaces are highly demanded not by the readers but
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 those who
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 to find a place for an exhibition, public event, art performance, educational or local activity and many other occasions.
This
 trend seems to be spread all over the world both in developed and underdeveloped countries.
That is
 why
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 see the future of public
libraries
 as
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local civic centers where different activities for neighborhood and city inhabitants use to be held. In
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 I see a new multifunctional life of public
libraries
 and prefer not to speak about replacing its functions but transforming them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repositories of books
  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
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