Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree

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Informational technologies destroyed or going to destroy a lot of traditional forms of knowledge sharing and keeping - classic university classes, newspapers, printed books, encyclopedias and etc.
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why there is very popular public opinion on the problem of public
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funding. They say that there is no need to maintain
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, electronic
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and computers replaced them. As for me, public
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can not be
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computers and
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of information and a place where a person can get the sources of knowledge. It is obvious that today it is much easier to get access to Congress Library,
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than it was 20 years ago. And for that
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you do not have to go there physically. All you need is a laptop and
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I can not say that public
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must be closed. My own experience shows that nowadays public
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spaces are highly demanded not by the readers but
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to find a place for an exhibition, public event, art performance, educational or local activity and many other occasions.
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trend seems to be spread all over the world both in developed and underdeveloped countries.
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see the future of public
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local civic centers where different activities for neighborhood and city inhabitants use to be held. In
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I see a new multifunctional life of public
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and prefer not to speak about replacing its functions but transforming them.
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  • promoting literacy
  • community engagement
  • equal access to information
  • digital divide
  • accessibility issues
  • personalized assistance
  • educational programs
  • cultural events
  • safe spaces
  • community meetings
  • tactile experience
  • preserving historical documents
  • important cultural repositories
  • fostering a sense of community
  • communal hubs
  • serene and focused environment
  • conducive to study and reflection
  • irreplaceable value
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