The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the
number
of global
tourists
and their spending in the top five countries in 2012 and 2013. It is notable that France attracted the most
visitors
in both 2012 and 2013,
while
Italy was the least visited
country
among the five. The USA,
on the other hand
, earned the highest revenue from international
tourists
in both years. In 2012, France welcomed 83
million
global
tourists
, making it the most popular destination. The USA followed as the second most visited
country
with 66.7
million
visitors
. Spain and
China
ranked third and fourth in terms of international
visitors
, each with under 58
million
tourists
. Meanwhile, Italy was the least popular choice, attracting only 46.4
million
tourists
. In 2013, there was a slight increase in the
number
of
tourists
in each
country
, except for
China
, where the
number
of
visitors
fell from 57.7
million
to 55.7
million
. Regarding income from international tourism, the USA earned a substantial $126.2
billion
in 2012, which was over double the figure of any other
country
in the table. Spain received the second-highest income at $56.3
billion
in the same year, followed by France with $53.6
billion
,
China
with $50
billion
, and Italy with $41.2
billion
. In 2013,
although
each
country
saw an increase in tourist spending, the ranking of revenue from international tourism remained the same. Interestingly, despite a decrease in the
number
of
visitors
,
China
's revenue from international travellers increased to $51.7
billion
in 2013.
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