The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table compares the
number
of global tourists
and their spending in the top five countries in 2012 and 2013.
It is notable that France attracted the most visitors
in both 2012 and 2013, while
Italy was the least visited country
among the five. The USA, on the other hand
, earned the highest revenue from international tourists
in both years.
In 2012, France welcomed 83 million
global tourists
, making it the most popular destination. The USA followed as the second most visited country
with 66.7 million
visitors
. Spain and China
ranked third and fourth in terms of international visitors
, each with under 58 million
tourists
. Meanwhile, Italy was the least popular choice, attracting only 46.4 million
tourists
. In 2013, there was a slight increase in the number
of tourists
in each country
, except for China
, where the number
of visitors
fell from 57.7 million
to 55.7 million
.
Regarding income from international tourism, the USA earned a substantial $126.2 billion
in 2012, which was over double the figure of any other country
in the table. Spain received the second-highest income at $56.3 billion
in the same year, followed by France with $53.6 billion
, China
with $50 billion
, and Italy with $41.2 billion
. In 2013, although
each country
saw an increase in tourist spending, the ranking of revenue from international tourism remained the same. Interestingly, despite a decrease in the number
of visitors
, China
's revenue from international travellers increased to $51.7 billion
in 2013.Submitted by tina2359uo on
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