Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or not agree? You should write at least 254 words.

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly

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a question of

luck

. To what extent do you agree or not agree?

however

, several individuals believe that their

fulfillments

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based

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is based

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on their good

luck

, I totally disagree with that notion as the

person

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attempts and efforts

the

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major reason for their accomplishments. on

one

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hand, enormous people

are believe

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the word of

luck

. since they grew up with parents who

are learned

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them that the future will come by

luck

. so, the

person

shouldn't give attention

for

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any upcoming plans. because

,

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your

luck

will manage it by the way.

I

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is really

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wrong

notions

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and the

person

should eliminate that

luck

draws the

person

future.

on the other hand

, I totally believe that the

humans

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efforts itself the main

are

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the main reason for achieving dreams. because when the

person

tries to improve

his self

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by learning new skills and

work

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hard for many hours. definitely, he will be

reward

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. after

that

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he may get a good opportunity which can allow him to achieve his aims.

furthermore

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the persons who

are

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worked and educated extremely are never

equally

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with

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the persons who thought that their

luck

will

fulfill

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the

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their

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aims.

for

instance

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a

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two friends of mine

one

of them had

been

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studied

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for 18 years to

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the

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medicine

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university which he dreamed

with

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and the other

one

he

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relied on his thoughts that his

luck

will draw him

a

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good future. so

that

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he

had

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decided to study at all.

eventually

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the first

one

began a successful doctor

while

the other

person

worked as

waiter

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in

restaurant

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the restaurant

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which is doesn't his

aims

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.

to conclude

, I would say that

luck

is a heresy had been created by lazy people trying affecting on

the

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other

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others

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negatively to destroy

the

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society.