You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement. Write a letter to accommodation officer regarding this. - Describe the situation - Explain the problem and why it is difficult to work. - Say what kind of accommodation you prefer.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

this

letter to share some consequences that I have been facing for 2 months. I got

this

service through the school hostel registrar. My flat is situated on the second floor and I have been sharing my apartment with another student. We have been got disturbed by the exact upper floor tenants. They are very aggressive and loud and they do not act like decent people. We are disturbed a lot by footsteps, it seems like the roof will fall apart on us if they use the same way of walking.

Moreover

, They talk and laugh very loudly. They usually start making noise after 11 pm. I would request you to change my living place. I am an IT student and need some quiet space to do coding.

Besides

, nights are for rest, so how could a learner cope with

this

behaviour in

this

busy schedule of school life? I look forward to hearing from you, Yours Sinserely, Harpreet Kaur.

Submitted by harpreet291kaur on Tue Jul 18 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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