It is important for children to learn the diffrence between right and wrong ar an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what wxtent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children

It is essential for toddlers and kids to learn the
difference
to
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what is acceptable and what it is not at
early
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age
. Some people believe that
given
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them a punishment is vital to help them to grow and learn the
difference
. I strongly agree with
this
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mentality
because
children
will become adults and need to follow
society
's
rules
and
parents
and
teachers
should remove toys or phones that
children
love to punish them to allow them
learn
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good behaviour.
Children
need to learn the
difference
between right and wrong at
very
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early
age
because they will become adults who need to follow
society
's
rules
.
Firstly
, when
children
learn at
early
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age
that means not following
rules
,
this
will
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them to no valuable items
such
as toys,
cellphones
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cell phones
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or
watchin
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watching
watchin'
TV. As
result
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a result
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, they learn the importance of following
parent's
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their parent's
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rules
.
Also
, they experience what means to be rejected by
parents
or
teachers
because they did not follow instructions, so
these
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this
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type of behaviour is similar
with
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adult's
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rules
.
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instance, in The United
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States
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if people do not follow
trafic
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traffic
rules
, they might get a ticket and need to pay a fine, and if they do not pay the bill, they might go to prison.
Parents
and
teachers
should punish
children
when they do not follow instructions, and one way is to
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valuable
itmes
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items
such
as
cellpones
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cellphones
cell phones
or not having the
privilige
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privilege
to watch a TV program.
To begin
with, learning the importance of
follow
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directions at
early
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age
, allow them to think
the
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difference
of
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not
be
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part of a system.
However
when
children
do not follow
direccions
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directions
, they need to suffer some consequences like going to bed without dessert, so they might feel pain for not
enjoy
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life like the rest of the
children
. To illustrate, in most countries,
parents
punish their
children
by giving them thinking time when they do not obey at home, and
this
help
children
to have time and think
for
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a way to apologize and learn from having
a
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bad behaviour.
To conclude
, it is vital for
children
to learn what is acceptable or what is not at
early
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an early
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age
to allow them to learn how human beings behave in
a
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society
because later on these
children
will be adults as well. More importantly,
parents
and
teachers
should help to
disciplinate
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discipline
these kids at home and at
schools
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, so they can have a better understanding of the importance of
beahave
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behave
well. If
children
are not punish
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are not punished
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at
early
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age
, they
migh
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might
encounter
difficult
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to adapt
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adapting
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to
society
.
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