The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph display about the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. From 1995 to 1999.
Firstly
, the expenses
of the Satellite was
less than 80000 in 2004, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
then
in 2006 it was around 80000, in 2008 it was more than 80000, 2010
it was nearly 100000, Change preposition
in 2010
2012
Change preposition
in 2012
was
around 100000, 2014 Unnecessary verb
apply
it
was between 80000 to 120000.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
Secondly
, the expenses
of cable were more than 80000 in 2004, in 2006 it was around 90000, in 2008 it was less than 120000, in 2010 it was between 80000 to 120000, in 2012 it was low compared to 2010 with nearby
80000, 2014 it was nearly 70000.
Correct your spelling
nearly
Thirdly
, the expenses
of the internet were increasing from 2004 to 2014. In 2004 it was nearly 10000, in 2006 it was around 40000, in 2008 it was 60000, in 2010 it was near by
120000, in 2012 it was more than 120000 and in 2014 it was less than 200000. In the broadcast Change preposition
apply
expenses
, in the
2004 it was less than 80000, in 2006 it was around 80000, in 2008 it was between 80000 to 120000, in 2010 it was Change the article
apply
near by
100000, 2012 it was more than 80000 and in 2014 it was 120000.
In conclusion, in Correct your spelling
nearby
above
information data is given from 2004 to 2014.Correct article usage
the above
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