is a commonly held belief that the death penalty is a good deterrent to prevent heinous crimes. However, others believe that life long sentence is a better deterrent. Discuss both views and give tour opinioIt n.

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into two groups. The first group argued that villains who made terrible crimes must have
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penalty
.
Nevertheless
, another group of people reckon that life long sentence is better. Personally, I do not have a concrete answer
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and
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spends around 50 thousand dollars annually on one prisoner.
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25 years and
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will die in 80 years, he will spend in prison 55years and
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have to spend on him around 2.5 million dollars.
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in order to improve
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some
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of roads or medicine
in particular
regions.
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always appropriate.
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accident.
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individuals
could help to conduct experiments or provide useful information. In conclusion,
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always necessary for some cases.
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and so on must get
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