Man working people get little or no exercices either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, all over the world
people
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are very busy
day
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by
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. They don'
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have a spend time for themselves. Because of that
people
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are
day
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by
day
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, they suffer from ill.
Society
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has to discuss these problems and solutions.
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essay will discuss problems and solutions.
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, these days
people
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are running to earn money. They are thinking always about the family's successes and children's feeding. As an
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,
people
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are competitively earning money. They always think about their family's
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-by-
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success.
secondly
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,
people
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they life don'
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have any schedule. Their journey always following for a job. Because of
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they protest their real life.
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,
people
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running behind for money. They don'
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want to think about their healthy life. As an
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, they don'
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think about their food. if they wanted to eat they buy in the shop something eat
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as fast food. As a cause become obesity. They have to be done about
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problem.
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, the government should inform the
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about
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. As an
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,
people
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are always watching TV .government should do advertising about how to become
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and ill. For the more, they always have to give advertising for exercise. As an
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usually,
people
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can walk daily for at least half an hour. Always TV programs must be informed
society
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. In conclusion,
people
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who are running the work become ill. in my opinion,
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should be why
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always have ill and why they took medicine. they have to know about having to solve
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problem.
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