Man working people get little or no exercices either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, all over the world
people
are very busy day
by day
. They don't
have a spend time for themselves. Because of that people
are day
by day
, they suffer from ill. Society
has to discuss these problems and solutions. This
essay will discuss problems and solutions.
Firstly
, these days people
are running to earn money. They are thinking always about the family's successes and children's feeding. As an example
, people
are competitively earning money. They always think about their family's day
-by-day
success. secondly
, people
they life don't
have any schedule. Their journey always following for a job. Because of that
they protest their real life.
Add a comma
,that
On the other hand
, people
running behind for money. They don't
want to think about their healthy life. As an example
, they don't
think about their food. if they wanted to eat they buy in the shop something eat such
as fast food. As a cause become obesity. They have to be done about this
problem. Firstly
, the government should inform the society
about this
. As an example
, people
are always watching TV .government should do advertising about how to become obesity
and ill. For the more, they always have to give advertising for exercise. As an Replace the word
obese
example
usually, people
can walk daily for at least half an hour. Always TV programs must be informed society
.
In conclusion, people
who are running the work become ill. in my opinion, society
should be why people
always have ill and why they took medicine. they have to know about having to solve this
problem.Submitted by manushamanu1024 on
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