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Man working people get little or no exercices either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, all over the world
people
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 are very busy
day
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 by
day
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. They don'
t
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 have a spend time for themselves. Because of that
people
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 are
day
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 by
day
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, they suffer from ill.
Society
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 has to discuss these problems and solutions.
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 essay will discuss problems and solutions.
Firstly
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, these days
people
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 are running to earn money. They are thinking always about the family's successes and children's feeding. As an
example
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,
people
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 are competitively earning money. They always think about their family's
day
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-by-
day
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 success.
secondly
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,
people
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 they life don'
t
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 have any schedule. Their journey always following for a job. Because of
that
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 they protest their real life.
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,
people
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 running behind for money. They don'
t
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 want to think about their healthy life. As an
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, they don'
t
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 think about their food. if they wanted to eat they buy in the shop something eat
such
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 as fast food. As a cause become obesity. They have to be done about
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 problem.
Firstly
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, the government should inform the
society
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 about
this
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. As an
example
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,
people
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 are always watching TV .government should do advertising about how to become
obesity
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obese
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 and ill. For the more, they always have to give advertising for exercise. As an
example
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 usually,
people
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 can walk daily for at least half an hour. Always TV programs must be informed
society
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. In conclusion,
people
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 who are running the work become ill. in my opinion,
society
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 should be why
people
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 always have ill and why they took medicine. they have to know about having to solve
this
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 problem.

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