The table below shows how many people (in millions) used different forms of public transport in MIlan from 2010 to 2014
The given table illustrates the
number
of people
in Milan
used
five different types of public vehicles between 2010 and 2014.
Correct pronoun usage
who used
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number
of people
used
public transport in Wrong verb form
using
Milan
rose at
the given period, except the Change preposition
during
number
of people
used
buses fell in 2011. Correct pronoun usage
who used
Moreover
, metro
was the popular type of Add an article
the metro
vehicles
among Milanos.
Looking at the information in more detail, Fix the agreement mistake
vehicle
Metro
, trains, and trams were the three most popular public transport in the first year. 3 Correct article usage
the Metro
million
of
Change preposition
apply
people
in Milan
used metro
in 2010, Correct article usage
the metro
while
trains and trams were lower at 1.4 million
and 1.3 million
respectively. All those figure
increased considerably every Change the determiner
figures
years
where 5 Change to a singular noun
year
million
of
inhabitants in Change preposition
apply
Milan
used metro
Correct article usage
the metro
at the end
of the year, and this
number
was the highest number
among other transportation.
As
respect to the two least popular Change preposition
With
of
public vehicles. A Change preposition
apply
million
of
Change preposition
apply
people
used buses and it experienced fell to 0.8 million
. This
figure reached a peak at
2.4 Change preposition
of
million
in 2014. According to
taxis, only 0.6 million
Milanos used taxis in the first years and it always rose by 0.1 million
every years
. Change to a singular noun
year
Finally
, 1 million
of
Change preposition
apply
people
used taxis at
the final year.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, milan, metro, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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