You recently took a plane to a holiday in a foreign city, and on arrival you found that your luggage was lost. You did not receive your luggage until the last day of your holiday. Write to the airline, •complaining about this situation •saying why it caused you problems •seeking suitable compensation Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’ Do not write any addresses Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter regarding the loss of my

baggage

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at Dubai Airport on 12th April 2023. My

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consists of one bag pack and two suitcases.

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, all of my

baggage

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was labelled which means that my full name and my flight number were attached to them clearly. In terms of my situation, when I arrived at Dubai Airport I realized that my

baggage

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was listed in the missing list. From

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perspective, I asked my airline to find my

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. Unfortunately, they told me,

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not our duty to find them. In the meanwhile, I

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myself in a critical situation simply because I lost my luxury laptop with many types of important data in that.

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, my books and my suits were lost. And I was forced to buy them because of my significant meeting. I am requesting,

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, that you kindly reimburse me the cost of $4200 for all these items, and I have attached all relevant receipts. As you see,

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sum does not include compensation for my inconvenience and wasted time. I look forward to receiving your confirmation of

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payment. Kind Regards, Kambiz Pirzad

Submitted by kambiz.pirzad on Thu Jul 20 2023

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Provide more details on your inconvenience and wasted time.

coherence and cohesion

Good use of logical structure and suitable greeting and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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