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The given line chart provides information about the number of GM cars which ware sold in central Asian countries between 2010 and 2022

The given line chart provides information about the number of GM cars which ware sold in central Asian countries between 2010 and 2022
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The supplied line graph illustrates the number of inhabitants in giant two countries in the world including
India
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 and
China
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 between 2000 and 2050 .
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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India
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 shows a sharp rise over the years when compared to
China
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.
Firstly
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, in 2000, there were more people living in
China
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 than in
India
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 . The number of residents in two countries
India
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 and
China
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 was 1 , 1.25 respectively.
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, between 2000 and 2010 saw a significant rise in Population in
India
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 by 0,2
billion
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whereas
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China
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's citizens had a slight growth over the period by 0,1
billion
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 .
According to
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 the graph , the population of
India
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 will climb more quickly than
China
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's people from 2000 to 2030 and they reach 14.5
billion
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 . After that Indians will continue a marginal increase until 2050 and reach 1.6
billion
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 .
However
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,
China
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's people have a slight fall between 2030 and 2050 by 0.5
billion
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 . 2000 and 2050 witnessed a climb in each two countries
India
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 and
China
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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