The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.
the two diagrams show the city layout of Islip
town
centre
and how it would be changed between now and the future.
Overall
, it is evident that this
city would undergo several developments along with
improvements to its social infrastructure which includes the construction of new buildings and roads.
Before the development, the layout of Islip town
centre
seems very simple and underdeveloped. The most noticeable feature of the centre
is the main road
, which runs in the east-west direction through the centre
of the town
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road
, there are shops lined up. on the south side of shops, housings are located.
By looking at the second diagram, it is clear that
the current city layout in planning would be completely redesigned. there is a dual carriageway, circulating around the town
. And on
inside of dual carriageway, there are new facilities Change preposition
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such
as parking lots, a bus station. Also
, part of the main road
is converted into pedestrian
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