The Chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 (Thousands/Year)

The Chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 (Thousands/Year)
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The chart illustrates the number of
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from three European countries expected in four cities.
It is clear that
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Marid is predicted to be a destination which attracted the largest number of
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in 2018, followed by Roma,
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Paris,
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the opposite was true for Liverpool.
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, the US accounted for the highest figure for
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expected in all four cities. As can be seen from the graph, the preferred destination for
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from the US is forecasted to be Marid, with approximately 100,000
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, compared to around 80,000 travellers from Canada, and only 70,000 travellers from Mexico.
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, the predicted number of
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coming to Liverpool is significantly lower in 2018. To be specific, just nearly 50,000
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from the US, twice times as much as that in Canada, with only 25,000 people. The statistics for Mexico are substantially lower, just only 18,000
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expected to arrive. Looking at the table in more detail, there will be about 80,000 Americans are estimated to visit Roma in the year 2018, followed by 50,000 travellers from Canada.
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, the opposite expectancy can be seen in the figure for
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from Mexico, just only a fourth of the statistics for Americans, at about 20,000 people. Meanwhile, the predicted data for Paris is relatively similar, with just over 60,000
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from each country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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