You recently did a short cookery courses. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course. Say how much cooking you've done since the course. Suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer.

Hi, dear Madam Shakhnoza. I have recently been to your cooking course. As you know, my full name is Jumayeva Sarvinoz. I am so pleased to go to

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place. Cause, during my spare time,

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have learnt, How to be prepared of food. I am fond of making delicious meals.

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time, it grants me some relaxation,

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, I will be one of the luckiest people in the world when

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am roasting steak, barbecue or other meats. I have performed cooking a lot in

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course. Mainly, prepared kohanim, manti,

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, it is impressed magnificent circumstances. Now I am going to enter some recommendations and ask you to be built the biggest and most antique restaurant,

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it will be better to be opened a cookery course and I think, You will get your help by teaching

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, Which things should be done for cooking the best. Why do

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? Because I would like to expand your filial to be known. reckon, My offer is into you. I am looking forward to expect your answer. Sincerely, your apprentice: Jumayeva Sarvinoz.