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The process diagram details the steps by which liquid chocolcate is produced from cocoa beans.

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The process depicts the steps that are involved in the production of liquid chocolate which is produced from
cocoa
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beans
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.
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,
it is clear that
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 the process begins with the harvest of ripe
cocoa
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 pods and ends with the extraction of liquid chocolate after pressing the roasted
beans
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 It is clear from the chart that
cocoa
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beans
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 are cultivated and harvested mostly from South America,Africa and Indonesia.When the green
cocoa
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 pods turn red,it is time to harvest those.These ripe,red pods are carefully taken out. These
beans
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 are fermented in nature conditions and are dried under the sun.
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jkoe
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eyes
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. Probing ahead,the
beans
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 are subjected to roasting to an extreme temperature of 350
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celsius
.The major step in the factory is the removal of the outer shells of the
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 and these
beans
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 are crushed into small pieces prior to the process of pressing ,in which the liquid chocolate is extracted.

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