In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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the agriculture

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agriculture

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field,

hunger

problem

is still one of the major

problem

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for

governments

. The reason for

this

is that some

people

in

governments

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who

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are chasing

money

consider food and

agriculture’s

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product

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as a source of revenue and try to earn

money

by making

people

hungry.

Thus

, a vital and effective solution for

this

issue is necessary and it should provide by WHO and other

health

organization

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and police departments. Suffering from

hunger

is still one of the biggest

problem

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despite

improvement

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in agriculture and just considering income and

money

from some ambitious

people

is the main reason

of

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that. It means some

people

look at

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problem

around the

world

as an opportunity to earn

money

.

Therefore

, they buy

agriculture’s

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product

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products

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from

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the farmer

a farmer

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farmer

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farmers

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and try to find countries that give them more

money

and

due to

this

fact poor

country

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countries

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cannot effort buying food production for their

people

.

Thus

, since we have

these kind

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of

people

in

governments

, we cannot solve

hunger

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issue. One solution for

this

huge

problem

is that

governments

should work with

health

organization

and WHO to solve it.

This

means that WHO and

health

organization

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organizations

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should ensure that

agriculture

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goods, produce in

healthy

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a healthy

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situation

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and

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that farmer

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farmer

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farmers

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trade their product directly with

governments

not

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a

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third person.

Moreover

,

governments

should always spend a part of

yearly

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budget to find criminals and

the

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people

who want

earn

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money

by trading with

people

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problems.

Therefore

,

governments

and police departments all over the

world

should

alliance

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to avoid illegal trading

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of agriculture’s

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agriculture’s

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products. In conclusion,

hunger

problem

is a serious issue all over the

world

and it can cause major

health

problem

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problems

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for children and adults

specially

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who

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those who

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are living in deprived areas.

Thus

, it is an obligation for

governments

and all

organization

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organizations

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around the

world

to solve

this

major

problem

.