The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below illustrates
procedure
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the procedure
a procedure

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of
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for

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the production of instant noodles.
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, it consists
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of 8

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steps
where
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which

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it
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apply

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started with flour
storing
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stored

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into
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in

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the silos
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and finish

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finish
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finishes

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off by labelling and sealing the product. In the first step, the flour is transported
with
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by

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trucks and
stores
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stored

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into
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in

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the
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apply

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silos that had
the
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apply

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optimal storage condition which
help
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helps

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to extend the storage time. Flour is
mix
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mixed

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with water and oil in the mixer and turn into dough sheets with
help
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the help

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of rollers. The machines slice the sheets into strips which
is
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are

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then
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

shaped into noodle discs. The noodle discs undergo cooking in oil which
have
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has

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high
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a high

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temperature.
This
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step can act as preservation as it
help
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helps

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to
kills
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kill

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microorganisms on top. After that, the noodle is dry
then
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Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

putting it one by one into cups. Vegetable and spices is
add
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added

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into
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to

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the cup before labelling. The
labeled
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labelled

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products will be
seal
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sealed

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in the meanwhile is ready to
be sell
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be sold

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to any supermarket.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufactured
  • ingredients
  • dough
  • rolled out
  • thin strips
  • steaming process
  • partially cooked
  • fried
  • dehydrating
  • packaged
  • distribution
  • quality control
  • standards
  • flavoring powder
  • sauce packet
  • traditional pasta
  • dehydration
  • instant cooking
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