The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below illustrates

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the procedure

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the production of instant noodles.

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, it consists

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steps

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it

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started with flour

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into

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the silos

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and finish

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finish

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off by labelling and sealing the product. In the first step, the flour is transported

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trucks and

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into

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the

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silos that had

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optimal storage condition which

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to extend the storage time. Flour is

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with water and oil in the mixer and turn into dough sheets with

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of rollers. The machines slice the sheets into strips which

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then

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shaped into noodle discs. The noodle discs undergo cooking in oil which

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high

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a high

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temperature.

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step can act as preservation as it

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to

kills

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microorganisms on top. After that, the noodle is dry

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putting it one by one into cups. Vegetable and spices is

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into

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the cup before labelling. The

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products will be

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in the meanwhile is ready to

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to any supermarket.