The table shows the amount of spent on healthcare in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and recording the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

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The given table clearly illustrates the differences in the expenditure on healthcare

services

Japan

, Italy, France, German, and the

USA

Overall

, the

USA

has the highest total amount spent

whereas

Japan

experiences the lowest one among the 5 countries.

Furthermore

, public spending is always higher than private ones in all countries.

To begin

with, the

USA

has the highest spending with a total of 14.3

GDP

Moreover

, the expense of private and public in the

USA

also

are the highest ones with 8

GDP

and 6.3

GDP

respectively. Germany is the second country in the cost of healthcare

services

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furthermore

Add a comma

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the highest public spending is in

this

nation at 8.6 GP. France has a 2.1

GDP

lower than the second country.

Japan

spends the lowest amount of money on total and private health

services

with 7.2 and 1.4

GDP

respectively among all countries. The difference between

Japan

and Italy is only 0.5 of

GDP

Furthermore

, the expenditure on public medical

services

in Italy has the lowest amount with a 5.3

GDP

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

172 words

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