Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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are a place where numerous

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are taken care of thoroughly, mainly for tourism purposes as they are symbolic of our national ecological system. The majority of people have the idea that

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are an evil place for

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some think that it helps to conserve the local endangered species.

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, I believe there are reasons for the conflict between these two perspectives. First of all, the

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may seem cruel towards the

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as they are separated from their original habitat. The new place in the

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for the

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has caused them to feel great stress as they have to adapt to their new environment.

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lead to behavioural changes in the

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as they are now in a new area, which means they might not be able to survive in the wild anymore. For

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, the Malayan Tiger

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born and grown in the

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will not get adapted to the wild on its own as they do not possess survival skills.

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should be concerning as the

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are not supposed to be kept in a foreign area to them, just for the sake of human business.

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, there is

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a saying that

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actually play an important role in conserving the

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that are listed as endangered on the red list by the International Union for Conservation of Nature (IUCN). Most

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will not only protect the

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by providing them with full resources

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as food and great habitat, but they will

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try to increase the population of the species through breeding programmes to prevent them from going extinct forever.

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,

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in China is trying to increase the population of Panda by making sure each of their offsprings is well-taken care of, as female panda tends to neglect their children after giving birth.

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, it can be said that

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are responsible

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the nation from losing its unique

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extinction. In conclusion, the existence of

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plays an important role in conservation and tourism purposes despite some

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to the

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. I think that It actually depends on how the management of the

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handles its

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. As long as the

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provide the best environment and conditions for the

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to live without any form of cruelty, only

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it is morally acceptable to society.