Many people think that zoos are cruel. Others think they are helpful in protecting rare animals. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Zoos

are a place where numerous

animals

are taken care of thoroughly, mainly for tourism purposes as they are symbolic of our national ecological system. The majority of people have the idea that

zoos

are an evil place for

animals

,

while

some think that it helps to conserve the local endangered species.

Hence

, I believe there are reasons for the conflict between these two perspectives. First of all, the

zoo

may seem cruel towards the

animals

as they are separated from their original habitat. The new place in the

zoo

for the

animals

has caused them to feel great stress as they have to adapt to their new environment.

This

will

also

lead to behavioural changes in the

animal

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as they are now in a new area, which means they might not be able to survive in the wild anymore. For

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, the Malayan Tiger

that is

born and grown in the

zoo

will not get adapted to the wild on its own as they do not possess survival skills.

This

should be concerning as the

animals

are not supposed to be kept in a foreign area to them, just for the sake of human business.

On the other hand

, there is

also

a saying that

zoos

actually play an important role in conserving the

animals

that are listed as endangered on the red list by the International Union for Conservation of Nature (IUCN). Most

zoos

will not only protect the

animals

by providing them with full resources

such

as food and great habitat, but they will

also

try to increase the population of the species through breeding programmes to prevent them from going extinct forever.

For example

,

Zoos

in China is trying to increase the population of Panda by making sure each of their offsprings is well-taken care of, as female panda tends to neglect their children after giving birth.

Thus

, it can be said that

zoos

are responsible

to help

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the nation from losing its unique

animals

due to

extinction. In conclusion, the existence of

zoos

plays an important role in conservation and tourism purposes despite some

may be

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disadvantaged

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to the

animals

. I think that It actually depends on how the management of the

zoo

handles its

animals

. As long as the

zoos

provide the best environment and conditions for the

animals

to live without any form of cruelty, only

then

it is morally acceptable to society.