The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

The two maps reveal a bookshop in 2000 and now.

Overall

, it is clear from the map diagram that the bookstore has changed considerably with several changes. The most important changes are that the bookshop now has a table and chair so visitors can read their book there. One of the most striking changes is the fiction

books

section which was replaced by many more

books

on topics like art, hobbies, and cookery. The previous place that used to store art, hobbies, and cookery which is in the middle of the room turned into a table and chair.

Furthermore

, The Café located in the southern of the room was knocked down to make way for the non-fiction book section.

On the other hand

, there are several sections that remain unchanged like the travel

books

section, new

books

, and the service desk. These places are located in front of the entrance of the bookstore on the western of the building.

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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