The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.
The two maps reveal a bookshop in 2000 and now.
Overall
, it is clear from the map diagram that the bookstore has changed considerably with several changes. The most important changes are that the bookshop now has a table and chair so visitors can read their book there. One of the most striking changes is the fiction
books
section which was replaced by many more
books
on topics like art, hobbies, and cookery. The previous place that used to store art, hobbies, and cookery which is in the middle of the room turned into a table and chair.
Furthermore
, The Café located in the southern of the room was knocked down to make way for the non-fiction book section.
On the other hand
, there are several sections that remain unchanged like the travel
books
section, new
books
, and the service desk. These places are located in front of the entrance of the bookstore on the western of the building.
Submitted by galihw on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: