The map below show bookstore in 2000 and now.

The two maps reveal a bookshop in 2000 and now.

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, it is clear from the map diagram that the bookstore has changed considerably with several changes. The most important changes are that the bookshop now has a table and chair so visitors can read their book there. One of the most striking changes is the fiction

books

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section which was replaced by many more

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on topics like art, hobbies, and cookery. The previous place that used to store art, hobbies, and cookery which is in the middle of the room turned into a table and chair.

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, The Café located in the southern of the room was knocked down to make way for the non-fiction book section.

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, there are several sections that remain unchanged like the travel

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section, new

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, and the service desk. These places are located in front of the entrance of the bookstore on the western of the building.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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