Some people think that its betterto choose friends who always have same opinion as them.other believe its good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.

In
this
age, a great number of
people
tend to use random
medicines
and
treatments
and they are not going to their usual
doctors
anymore.
Although
it can be seen that it shows the improvement of
people
's knowledge and drug stores, in my opinion, it's a negative development. There can be so many reasons that
people
don't want to visit their
doctors
.
Firstly
,the cost of using
alternative
medicines
and
treatments
is less than the cost of visiting their
doctors
.
However
, because of following the cheaper
way
, there will be additional
health
problems
. Some resources of
treatments
are not identical and they need the
doctors
' approval.Taking
medicines
,not knowing the side effects is too risky. Following and following after a cheaper
way
, they can face bigger
health
issues.These are the evidence that
this
is not a positive development.
Moreover
, regular medical check-up is necessary for
health
.
Although
the
alternative
treatment can relieve what they are suffering in the short term, as there is no consultation with a doctor, the cause of the
problems
is not known. These ways are misleading
people
not to take care of their
health
surely.
For instance
, some snake bite cases seem to relieve after
alternative
treatments
.
This
leads to the loss of
people
's lives since they are treating themselves
instead
of going to a hospital and getting secure treatment.
This
is the most obvious example of
this
case in rural areas.
Moreover
, there are some cases that
although
they get better from the original
health
problems
that they are suffering from because of
alternative
medicines
,the effect of these
treatments
is getting worse and can't be cured anymore for a long time.
To conclude
, it is not bad having a proper
way
to treat
health
problems
in a short time and cheaper
way
.
However
, everybody should have a regular visit to their
doctors
to know the situation of their
health
and the effects of the treatment.
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