The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compatisons where relevant.
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The map compares the infrastructure of the Ryemouth village in 1995 and recent
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. At first glance,
it is clear that
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there are a variety of improvements, namely entertainment amenities, housing and so on. First of all, the farmland and forest park, located in the top right-hand corner, had been removed and replaced by the golf and tennis court.
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the cafe on the beach remained in the same place, the parking lot had been constructed adjacent to the hotel, that sited opposite to cafe.
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, there was an increase in the number of housing on the
north-west
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side, and the road had been developed to the west. It is noticeable that shops and fish markets had been demolished and replaced by commercial areas, restaurants, and apartments.
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Also
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there was a
removement
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movement
of the port for fishing.
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, enormous improvements were made in order to recreate the village of
Ryemouth
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Tynemouth
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